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The Incredible Hulk
by [ADMIN] Kelly Mon Mar 11, 2013 7:35 pm
This piece was created about a month ago and to be used in a tagwall for a team on a different site. In general the piece took me quite some time to make, as a lot of the little details were made by hand, but I'm quite proud of the turnout.
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Re: The Incredible Hulk
by [ADMIN] Gummy Mon Mar 11, 2013 8:45 pm
I think your love for zombies and all that finds itself mixed in with some of your artwork such as this.
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Re: The Incredible Hulk
by Magic. Tue Mar 12, 2013 4:52 am
I really really like it, just a few things from my point of view: The red blood vessels/veins whatever they are stand out slightly to much to me, particularly around the shoulders where they are brightest. The other thing is the orange particles, I think maybe turn the opacity down just a tad on them. Oh, and also, needs a bit more of a focal, I find my eyes wandering a fair bit. Other than that, top notch, lighting is perfect. One of my favorites you've done 
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Re: The Incredible Hulk
by [ADMIN] Kelly Tue Mar 12, 2013 6:05 am
[ADMIN] Gummy wrote:I think your love for zombies and all that finds itself mixed in with some of your artwork such as this.
I'm not sure whether you mean that in a good way or not
Magic. wrote:I really really like it, just a few things from my point of view: The red blood vessels/veins whatever they are stand out slightly to much to me, particularly around the shoulders where they are brightest. The other thing is the orange particles, I think maybe turn the opacity down just a tad on them. Oh, and also, needs a bit more of a focal, I find my eyes wandering a fair bit. Other than that, top notch, lighting is perfect. One of my favorites you've done
I agree on the red veins; I added that in the end (I have a few different versions of this one piece) and that is one part that got stronger after several adjustments and all
For the orange particles I partly tried to make it look like he was so mad he had orange kind of smoke radiating from him, but then after I thought about it awhile, that seemed cheesy as all hell
But that was the original idea of that. Looking at it now (a month after I made it), I completely agree that the opacity should be toned down a tadHow might you suggest in this tag I go about making the focal be more dominate in the piece?
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Re: The Incredible Hulk
by Magic. Tue Mar 12, 2013 6:46 am
[ADMIN] Kelly wrote:[ADMIN] Gummy wrote:I think your love for zombies and all that finds itself mixed in with some of your artwork such as this.
I'm not sure whether you mean that in a good way or notMagic. wrote:I really really like it, just a few things from my point of view: The red blood vessels/veins whatever they are stand out slightly to much to me, particularly around the shoulders where they are brightest. The other thing is the orange particles, I think maybe turn the opacity down just a tad on them. Oh, and also, needs a bit more of a focal, I find my eyes wandering a fair bit. Other than that, top notch, lighting is perfect. One of my favorites you've done
I agree on the red veins; I added that in the end (I have a few different versions of this one piece) and that is one part that got stronger after several adjustments and all
For the orange particles I partly tried to make it look like he was so mad he had orange kind of smoke radiating from him, but then after I thought about it awhile, that seemed cheesy as all hell
How might you suggest in this tag I go about making the focal be more dominate in the piece?
Thanks for your C&C Magic
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Definitely introduce some more blending in to the piece. The parts where you don't want the focus to be is where you should blend. If it was me, I'd blend the legs into the background by darkening them/smudging etc. Secondly, the parts where you don't want the focus to be, blur slightly. Just a little bit, if you overdo it, it'll look weird and throw the depth off- it's a fine line.
I think that should help with the focal
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Re: The Incredible Hulk
by [ADMIN] Kelly Tue Mar 12, 2013 6:58 am
Magic. wrote:
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I'm not sure whether you mean that in a good way or notMagic. wrote:I really really like it, just a few things from my point of view: The red blood vessels/veins whatever they are stand out slightly to much to me, particularly around the shoulders where they are brightest. The other thing is the orange particles, I think maybe turn the opacity down just a tad on them. Oh, and also, needs a bit more of a focal, I find my eyes wandering a fair bit. Other than that, top notch, lighting is perfect. One of my favorites you've done
I agree on the red veins; I added that in the end (I have a few different versions of this one piece) and that is one part that got stronger after several adjustments and all
For the orange particles I partly tried to make it look like he was so mad he had orange kind of smoke radiating from him, but then after I thought about it awhile, that seemed cheesy as all hell
How might you suggest in this tag I go about making the focal be more dominate in the piece?
Thanks for your C&C Magic
+rep
Definitely introduce some more blending in to the piece. The parts where you don't want the focus to be is where you should blend. If it was me, I'd blend the legs into the background by darkening them/smudging etc. Secondly, the parts where you don't want the focus to be, blur slightly. Just a little bit, if you overdo it, it'll look weird and throw the depth off- it's a fine line.
I think that should help with the focal
Cheers; detailed suggestion
I'll give them a try when I find free time 
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Re: The Incredible Hulk
by TG09 Tue Mar 12, 2013 12:39 pm
Agreed with both of you regarding the red veins standing out a bit too much, but the rest is pretty solid
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